Mar 19, 2005

Poem

Once a Heaven,
now a wreck.
Abuser of emotions,
victorious attacks.

1000ft in depth,
numbness presides.
Walking the path,
of furious tides.

Decaying Corpses,
no sight for sore eyes.
Sombre faces,
with soughing cries.

2 comments:

YiDa aLL tHe WaY said...

ermm... first, I'd like to puji you for your remarkable little poem... Well, at least I feel that it's remarkable. Second, .... hmmm..there's no second... ooo.. wait, there is.. Which is please try to reduce the chances of you & Sean arguing.. PLEASE ...

Jasonmumbles said...

Funny, to see sister giving comment in another sister's blog. :P Apparently, Chea Hwey is more lazy to blog hor! Anyway, yeah, please try to reduce the noise, although you have to put down your face/maruah/pride or anything. :) It helps sometimes. After a while, he might feel like a barbarian for shouting/fighting for no reasons. :)